My Narrative
Kelsie Lorraine
First Grade Picture Book
Tommy the Blue Whale:
The Journey to find Supper
Beginning:
1s: Tommy, the blue whale, is very hungry.
2s: What do blue whales eat? (the hook)
Middle:
-Blue whales eat krill
-Tommy goes on a journey to find krill for supper
-Tommy has to reach surface for a breath b/c whales cannot breathe underwater
-Tommy meets up with his friend Sarah (the jellyfish)
-Tommy plays around in the ocean
-Tommy finds the krill while he is playing around
-Tommy eats supper
-Tommy plays and visits with his friends
End:
It was a long day for Tommy, but he found his supper. He completed his journey! Tommy will have to eat again so he will go on another journey soon. He better take a nap.
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Sounds good!! Can't wait to see how it turns out!! :)
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